This is the rough edit of the piece, which I have improved on since the crit session with our tutor. I have taken on board the comments and improved on general aspects of the piece I wasn't happy with. Although there are still parts to tweak, this is the structure of our drama. We still need to work on building tension up through the soundscape as well as adding some grain texture to the entire piece to create more of a filmic look. In addition, I intend to tilt the archway shot and zoom in slightly just to create more of a symmetrical look to it. Of course I also need to add credits and a few finishing touches. Overall, I am happy to hand this in, but not completely happy with the piece as I feel like I haven't been able to push it to the highest standards possible - due to the lack of shot lists and therefore in some cases lack of shots; which is due to some bad organisation on the group as a whole.
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